but unlike them, i've built an amour
that is the perfect size.
I try to give them more... then pause
& i say,
it's the wave in my hair
the stars in my eyes
the rose in my cheeks
the feel of my skin
the lift in my chin
the bridge of my nose
the curve of my lips,
I'm a woman Phenomenally,Phenomenal woman, that's me.......
Still puzzled, they stare
wondering what else lies beneath it all
looking at a gem so rare
they stare somemore.... then pause
& i say,
it's the glide in my walk
the sun in my smile
the ring in my laugh
the emotions in my tears
the passion in my word
the life in my breath
the feel in my touch
I'm a woman Phenomenally,Phenomenal woman, that's me.......
I walk into a room
and feel the eyes with every step i take
they swarm around me, like a hub of honey bees
waiting for the mistake they think i'll make.... they pause
& i say,
It's the click of my heels
the arch in my back
the palm of my hands
the love in my heart
the womb in my belly
the ride of my bosom
the strength in my shoulders
I'm a woman Phenomenally,Phenomenal woman, that's me.......
Men themselves are puzzled
for they know not what they see in me
in vain they try to unravel my inner mystery
try as they might.... they pause
& i say,
it's the feel of my affection
the need for my care
the comfort of my love
the warmth of my kindness
the energy in my hope
the belief in my faith
the truth in my goodness
I'm a woman Phenomenally,Phenomenal woman, that's me.......
Now you understand
why my head is never bowed,
I never have to brag, shout or talk real loud
but when i pass you by
I know i make you proud.....
Now, i say...
It's the grace of my style
the secret of my elegance
the spine in my confidence
the height of my intellect
the wisdom in my humility
the joy in my understanding
the woman in me....
I'm a woman Phenomenally,Phenomenal woman, that's me.......
4 comments:
Phenomenal woman, thats what u are and i totally agree 100%. always be urself. cheers
Hmmmmm,
Peotic huh?
Never knew you had it in you!
Quite a beatiful blend of words and styles.
Very impressive...brings to mind something I heard a while back 'the beauty in intelligence'...your writing is unique, i'm sure it will take you places.
DEEP... i like that:) i've been struggling with my lack of self esteem for as long as i can remember and i practically have to remind myself that i'm special. that the guys that always leave me are jerks. i wish i could just tune my senses to start believing what a phenomenal woman i am... that way i won't care who walks out on my or why. confused.
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